Advertising Information

How To Write Eye-Grabbing Headlines That Catapult Your Prospects Into Your Ads


If you're interested in improving the selling results of your ads, tweaking your headlines is a great place to start. Because your headlines influence the sales results of your ad more than any other element.

A great ad with the wrong headline can bomb, whereas a great headline on an average ad will probably do OK. Let's take a look at a few techniques for coming up with sales-boosting headlines.

First things first: Avoid these proven sales-killing "headlines" like the pox:

Your company name

A generic industry or service category (e.g. "Plumbing Contractor")

Or on a website or brochure, "Welcome to ABC Industries"

The points above sound basic (and they are), but it's surprising how many ads and websites make those mistakes.

So you've avoided those mistakes. What techniques can you use to create great selling headlines that practically catapult your readers into your ad? Here are a few ideas...

1. Call out to your target audience

If your message is aimed at stockbrokers, mention "stockbrokers" in the headline.

2. Mention specific benefits

Face it - consumers are jaded. We all are. Heck, I can hardly get out of bed in the morning :) General statements like "Lose weight fast" or "Save Money on _____" are no longer effective. Specific numbers and images evoke much more potent images in your prospects' minds than generalities. That's why they sell much better.

3. Use vivid, evocative verbs

Especially online, high-energy headlines work very well.

Here's a headline that uses all 3 of the above techniques...

"New Software Boosts Stockbrokers' Income by 34, 43, even 125% - by Slashing Time Spent Chasing "Dead" Accounts and Laser-Focusing Your Energies on the Big Players"

OK, it needs a bit of work, but you get the idea. Some people don't like this type of headline - it's too "hypey". And it's certainly not right for every kind of product or service - but I've had very good success with this type of headline, especially online.

4. Use "cognitive dissonance"

That's a fancy way of saying, make your audience curious. Here's a headline we're testing for a client who sells bumper stickers:

"Do You Wonder How We Can Sell Full-Colour Stickers At A 1-Color Price, with FREE Artwork?"

This type of headline makes people curious - they feel compelled to find the answer and relieve a sense of "dissonance" with this apparent paradox.

5. Include some challenging or surprising information

Here's a headline that I wrote for a lead-generating website for a rubbish removal contractor, 1300 Rubbish:

"Fast, Professional Rubbish Removal, Sydney-wide...We'll Pay You $1 Per Minute In Cash If We're Late!"

The "hook" is the guarantee. Also bear in mind that most of the people who see this headline will have already searched for the term "rubbish removal sydney" or similar, so they are expecting to see something related to those keywords.

How are your headlines? Can you use any of the above tips to get better response?

For more detailed information on how to improve your ads and written marketing materials, you can sign up free to our monthly newsletter, "Results-Driven Marketing Secrets".To join, just fill in the form below...

William Swayne is a internet marketing consultant based in Brisbane, Australia. He can be contacted at Marketing-Results.com.au.


MORE RESOURCES:

Wall Street Journal

National Advertising trade group opposes Yahoo-Google search ad deal
CNET News, CA - 6 hours ago
The ANA, a powerful group of over 400 companies that spend more than $100 billion in marketing and commercial advertising, said it conducted a comprehensive ...
Advertisers Not Backing Google/Yahoo Deal Washington Post
Advertiser group objects to Google-Yahoo tie up Reuters
Looking back on Google's 10 years San Francisco Chronicle
Mashable - TechWhack (press release)
all 227 news articles


KOHD

Get Ready For An Onslaught Of Food Advertising
The Consumerist, NY - 3 hours ago
Foodmakers are planning to bombard you with advertising to keep you from ditching their carefully groomed brands for some blechy cheapo generics. ...
Foodmakers plan big ad campaigns in down economy The Associated Press
all 233 news articles


Claire Beale on Advertising: Do we really need the Eurocrats to ...
Independent, UK - 4 hours ago
Last week the EP voted to adopt the principles of a report "on how marketing and advertising affect equality between women and men". ...


Advertising group opposes Yahoo-Google pact
The Associated Press - 5 hours ago
... it states its concern that "a Google-Yahoo partnership will control 90 percent of search advertising inventory and ... will likely diminish competition, ...


Flint-area school district mulls ads on buses
Chicago Tribune, United States - 14 hours ago
Children in Goodrich may soon have a new companion on the trip to school -- targeted advertising. Looking to raise extra revenue in a tough economy, ...


Advertising fun and emotions
Times of India, India - 20 hours ago
The wait finally ended for Lucknowites and it was time for them to witness the most awaited event of the year – Cannes Lions, 55th International Advertising ...


The Age

Marissa Mayer talks about Google at 10 -- and 20
Los Angeles Times, CA - 11 hours ago
Also, the way Google has changed and influenced online advertising, the way Google has changed the monetization of content online through AdSense and our ...
Video: Google: World's Most Powerful 10-year-old AssociatedPress
Google reigns as world's most powerful 10-year-old The Associated Press
Google turns 10 San Jose Mercury News
Sky News - Forbes
all 368 news articles


Keep little eyes from junk ads: experts
Sydney Morning Herald, Australia - Sep 6, 2008
But Kevin Rudd failed to take the policy to the 2007 election after pressure from the food and advertising industries. The Australian Communications and ...


Curbing advertising will cut obesity
The Australian, Australia - Sep 5, 2008
Restrictions on junk food advertising to children are a bit like that. The Australian Communications and Media Authority, in its draft report on children's ...


dBTechno

Is Google’s Chrome All about Advertising?
Profy - 6 hours ago
Advertising is how Google makes the money to finance acquisitions of other companies and its own large-scale developments resulting in much-hyped product ...
Video: Tech Test: Google Chrome Lacks Polish AssociatedPress
Google: In search of technology’s new frontiers Times Online
Google once reviled computer superpowers but domination is just ... Independent
PoliGazette - Motley Fool
all 294 news articles

Advertising - Google News

home | site map
© 2006