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Say What?


As the comedian Steve Martin once said, "some people have a way with words and some people have not way." Increasingly, I am seeing information from companies, particularly in news releases, that "has not way."

It's time for clarity in the corporate world.

Several news releases have crossed my screen recently that made me wonder if perhaps a new secret language was being used and I didn't have the code. See what you think:

"Freely accessible by the entire OSS community, PatentCafe's Open Source Software Patent Search Engine adds significant value to IBM's contribution by accelerating the integration of IBM's patented technology into the marketplace, helping to foster worldwide interoperability standards."

"An integral part of Sun's ongoing effort to provide developers with robust Java application development support, Java BluePrints for Wireless is a collection of end-to-end best practices, guidelines and architectural recommendations that demonstrates how to best utilize the strengths of the J2EE(TM) and the J2ME(TM) platforms to build a distributed, transaction-oriented enterprise application using J2EE on the server and J2ME on the client."

With a little help, I'll bet you, too, could add significant value by leveraging your robust end-to-end technology and thus foster worldwide interoperability.

"Bull" has become the official language of business. I say that corporate speak is akin to what is happening in customer service: the humanity is being taken out of the equation.

Fight the "bull." When you are writing news releases, letters, or even emails, break through the clutter by putting candor and personality into them.

A touch of humanity wouldn't hurt either.

Harry Hoover is managing principal of Hoover ink PR. He has 26 years of experience in crafting and delivering bottom line messages that ensure success for serious businesses like Brent Dees Financial Planning, Focus Four, Levolor, New World Mortgage, North Carolina Tourism, TeamHeidi, Ty Boyd Executive Learning Systems, VELUX, and Verbatim.


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PR Newswire Issues November 2008 Retail Review & Comparison
MarketWatch - 7 hours ago
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US agents arrest 3 for cash smuggling in PR
The Associated Press - 3 hours ago
SAN JUAN, Puerto Rico (AP) — US agents say they caught three men trying to fly out of Puerto Rico with $230000 hidden in their luggage. ...


Four Armed Men Rob Pr. George's Bank, Police Say
Washington Post, United States - Dec 3, 2008
AP Prince George's County police said four men armed with semiautomatic weapons have robbed a bank in Laurel. Police spokesman Cpl. Stephen Pacheco said ...


New York Daily News

Reacting to PR Disaster, Ford and GM Bolt Their Hangar Doors
Flying Magazine - 1 hour ago
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The Associated Press

Small plane crashes east of PR capital
The Associated Press - 23 hours ago
RIO GRANDE, Puerto Rico (AP) — Search teams slogged up a muddy, densely-wooded mountainside on Wednesday to locate a small plane with three people on board ...


Los Angeles Times

Pete Carroll a PR Wizzard
FOXSports.com - 7 hours ago
The scenario of USC in Miami is unlikely, but the master of PR has done his best to close the gap. What did it get him, another trip to the Rose Bowl. ...
A Weak NCAA Caves To Pete Carroll Bruins Nation
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Memo to the Big Three: First, Fire Your PR Departments
FOXNews - Dec 3, 2008
By Liz Peek I’d like to propose one cost-cutting measure for the Big Three: Fire your public relations outfits. They are, to put it mildly, not getting the ...


Many Pr. George's Seniors Failing to Take Exit Exams
Washington Post, United States - Dec 2, 2008
By Nelson Hernandez One of the largest hurdles in the struggle to get more than 2700 Prince George's County high school seniors to pass graduation exit ...


DS Simon Productions Introduces Financial Crisis PR Project ...
MarketWatch - 11 hours ago
NEW YORK, Dec 04, 2008 (BUSINESS WIRE) -- DS Simon Productions, a leading video communications firm, has introduced "Financial Crisis PR Project Insurance. ...


ZDNet

Apple Pulls Anti-Virus Advice Due To Bad PR?
The Consumerist, NY - 5 hours ago
By Meg Marco , 1:49 PM on Thu Dec 4 2008, 116 views According to Computerworld, Apple yanked a "controversial" support document from its website Tuesday, ...
Apple yanks antivirus advice from its Web site Computerworld
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